The chords are very unique and interesting, giving it quite a unique vibe. If I had to catch onto something it'd be that the drums don't always fit what goes on, and it is pretty short, but still pretty good
The chords are very unique and interesting, giving it quite a unique vibe. If I had to catch onto something it'd be that the drums don't always fit what goes on, and it is pretty short, but still pretty good
Thats true! I felt like something was off put couldnt figure it out. Thank you for the feedback!
I think this counts more as electric or dubstep than jazz, but I can see where you're coming from. I really like the guitar in the middle, sounds great, I feel like you should maybe revisit the idea, or the song as a whole because near the end it does fall apart a bit, or it might be just that FL studio drum being really on my nose. Idea is very good, execution mostly too, just that last 30 seconds I'd improve on.
Well i do make electronic music after all :D so even if i make rock, metal or jazz or anything else it will always have these influences. so it could be more of a electro/jazz fusion.
Anyway i did all of these spontaneously. About revisiting this, well see :D maybe someday in future ill get more solid ideas for this.
But dayum i love that last part the most actually its just so random and pure....my biggest thought after guitar was to have the synth like answer the guitar or just make a continuation of that melody, i still kinda lack speed with my guitar playing so that too could be a reason i decided for this, to just make a little more speedy licks.
Well the drums, i personally dont have much of a problem with those FLEX drum kits tho i find it interesting how so many people recognise them and find them irritating or something, its just drums for me so i use what i have :D
Anyway thanks for listening, i want to look a bit more into jazzy style so lets hope it will get better with time.
You're really off-key in some parts I feel like, and the beginning deffinitely is a little slow, about 30 seconds in it gets kind of good, the drums are very nice, but like I said, at least in my opinion this would have fit better as an instrumental, but I'm just some random from the internet, maybe you like your voice and that's honestly fine. More power to you, just letting my opinion out
no problem at letting your thoughts coming out! criticism is criticism, and the problem is that i always try to get out of the curve, by doing some stuff that i saw Car Seat Headrest do too, but they somehow can do this kinda of indie more wisely xd, i'm still learning how to increase the quality, but thanks for the feedback!
Yoooo this sounds really fun and epic, definitely could see it in a game like Cave Story (even though that game only uses 8 bit sounds) or Gunman Clive especially (probably since I just 100% it on my 3ds). It definitely sounds professional, I'll be sure to follow you on your next endevours, because this is really good.
OMG Thank you!!
IT'S DAY 1 WHOOOOOOOOOOOOO. It's not as good as I ranked it, probably would give it a 3.5/5 star composition wise but it's so wacky and I love the beginning so much it caught me really off-guard, I like when people get experimental
I like it quite a bit, has a very nice flow to it.
edit: OKAY I SWEAR I DIDN'T SEE THE COMMENT BELOW
I feel like the more it goes on, the more I like it. Not much of a fan of the first minute, but I really love the arpeggios at the end, I feel like it doesn't overstay it's welcome. Overall it's pretty solid
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