I read it as temporary and I have been dissapointed, as there awaited me no secretary /j
I feel like this is fine, once again, not much to say. I know it might be annoying, but I do think all of your songs so far have just been decent. Although the end definitely makes this my favourite out of the trilogy so far.
You've listened the Mansion Trilogy? That's cool!
I appreciate that this song was your favourite of the trilogy.
Here's Day 3, let's see how the story continues you guys :flushed: (yes that was intentional).
if I had to point out one thing, or actually two things is that the drums DEFINITELY SHOULDN'T GO ABOVE ODCB (that usually worsens the quality of the sample), and a smaller issue, and really nitpicky one at that would be right before the song actually starts the sample cracks a bit I believe. If the drum issue were fixed, then it would've been easily 4 out of 5 stars, but man is that too annoying of an issue for me. I'm ranking all of the songs by how they got released and what I think while listening to them, I list out what I think could be improved on and why. This is Why I gave it such a low score, because once again I really do feel nauseous when listening to it. I hope you don't think about this one score too much, but please keep it in mind (although the problems I described might be because I'm autistic and really sensitive to certain noises because of that)
Thanks for your feedback
Did you use the minecraft SF2?
Also woaaah kirby great. This is more of how many SF2's can I spot, there's also definitely I think something from the mother series? This is also short and sweet, Definitely sounds like something you'd hear before the end credits, a little cutscene like in Kirby's Adventure or like in Super Mario Land 2. Good stuff
It's all Kirby instruments except the crash cymbal and realistic oboe
This is a pretty solid track I have nothing against it, it's neither great nor bad. i gave the scared emoji to SamaadBae5 because I felt like it'd be funny
I appreciate your feedback! What can I do to make the track better?
Now I feel like this is a little bit too infective for my ears, the saws are very annoying at least to me, overall the whole song is very loud. I can't even really understand the lyrics. It's probably just not for me but I really am not a fan of it.
edit: I feel a little bad, like maybe I went too harsh on it in the comment, I meant no harm by it and I'm just trying to give my honest opinions on every single song with the jamuary2024 tag, which means I can't really delve into the artist, so I basically have to either remember every single song I heard or just for some write comments on the song below (Which still is the way I like to review things)
Aha no worries! I feel the same wayabout it tbh, but thats the nature of Jamuary! Even if it aint great, youre making something! Also i react with the crying react cuz its goofy so no harm done!
I beg you to do these voice add-ons on every song you compose, that's just so unique to hear and definitely warms me up to a good listen, because boy oh boy you sure did not dissapose with your second track, very catchy melody and overall excellently mixed. It doesn't have that 5 stars spark to it, but It's still very good
I'll try to them more often, just hoping they don't get old haha. Yeah, the track's a bit short and has some mixing kinks that should have been worked on more but it was nearly 3am so i just exported whatever i had for the challenge
I don't think I even like the idea here.
The drums are definitely too quiet, and the two instruments that actually play are very disonant. It just sounds all through unfinished.
Looking at it now, I'm pretty sure I rushed this one out. Hopefully the next one will be better
Is this the cover of the Carole King song? It Certainly is interesting how you covered it. If I had to describe it it would be jazz, maybe it's just not my kind of jazz you know.
edit: oh okay, that's well. I still gave MY opinion of what I think of it, I just found some similarities between both songs so I was wondering.
It is not a cover of Carole King, it was just an improvisation.
I don't know why but I thought of the spy theme the second I heard the opening.
It definitely catches it's own spirit the moment the start repeats. I was kind of along the ride until I read the title, then I knew I was gonna be in for something. And even though a little long the wait DEFINITELY PAID OUT. I don't know what you did but the guitar sounds really great, the guitar alone makes the whole track for me, it's just so different that Even if the first half was definitely no better than 7/10, the guitar rises the whole second and even first part to at least a 8/10 track in my eyes. Now I don't know if I'll keep it in favourites, but for now I am adding it (Boy has day 2 has been so much better than day 1 [I'm listening to every jamuary song in order of release])
Thank you so much for review one of my tracks again! reading someone having the experience of listening my music is fantastic, i love to see others people thoughts about it, and i'm glad you liked it!
Yeah I like this, kind of shocking you turned how shit FL Keys are into this, that's the biggest surprise for me.
I really groove with this good job (and also even though I still recognise the Drums they deffinitely were changed a bit in the mixing which I also appriciate.
oh yeah, when I use default FL stuff I make sure to change it up a lot as to not sound so typical.
though I didn't modify the keys that much actually, I think I just edited the hardness a bit and added some EQ and lo-fi effect with effector, you can check the FLP and compare the default preset to mine LOL
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